Massachusetts, USA There are really two aspects to this - how to write a fight of any kind, and how to write the swordplay.
When I started off, I was incredibly detailed about the motions.
I advise not doing that. The reader starts focusing on trying to translate text into visuals, and describing every last moment gets confusing quick. I also try to use fighting styles to inform the reader about the character. God favor the right.
Hans circled away from him, keeping his sword in motion and continually changing his guard and stance. Hans countered by raising his sword high and striking horizontally.
As Johannes screamed out in pain and clutched at his face, Hans moved in close. He gasped, choked, and stared at his opponent with a mix of surprise and malice. The crowd let out a mix of excited cheers and mournful cries as Hans removed his sword and let Johannes fall to the ground.
Hans shows his experience. The second example is from a fantasy story. Janus and Xen got to their feet. Both breathed heavily as sweat ran down their faces. Xen glared with sheer hatred. The shadowknight swung first, the paladin receiving the blow with the flat of his blade.
It was all Janus could do to stay standing. He was tired, and he was already hurt from several glancing blows. Xen was fresher, and his armor gave him extra weight and power in their struggles. The shadowknight had no such disadvantage.
He wanted to unleash all his rage and hatred on the dark elf. The paladin ignored these feelings and focused. Xen was just another enemy, one of countless, and he deserved no thought save for his neutralization.
He was no more than a steel practice dummy that fought back.Sep 15, · As for how to write the action scene, I think there's another thread for that.
Some of the biggest problems people get when writing a sword fighting scene is not knowing the weapons used. A long sword most likely isn't going to be used to thrust, and a foil is less likely to slash. Some swords include: I.
Broadsword — A long, heavy weapon designed for cutting rather than thrusting. This is a must-read article that applies to general fight scenes as well. 9. How To Write Sword A Sword Fight Scene: Write That Scene has outlines for tons of scenes and this one on sword fighting will help you set [ ] Reply.
James. Jul 05, · Writing a Believable Sword Fight Scene (Part II) Quite a long time ago I wrote a post here on writing a believable sword fight scene. It continues to be popular, and I've had numerous requests to post more on the topic.
I . Writing a Fight Scene Now, as to how you actually write a fight: First, remember that every attack either hits, misses or is parried. If your villain lunges at the hero, the good guy has got to parry and retreat or he's dead. Sep 15, · I would suggest you imagine the fight in your head first.
Understand each movement the fighters make towards the outcome of the fight. Swords are slashing weapons prdominantly. Just deside what style your fighters would use its like hand to hand in that way. Fencing is a style. As is Tai Chi.
Conclusion. I hope this will help anyone who is writing a sword fight scene to be able to proceed with confidence. If you find that you are still uncomfortable writing a sword fight, there are many guides to traditional sword fighting you may consult, though be warned: many contain gory sketches.